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Commission: Foin

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Commission from: :icondarksaph:
Character Foin [link] by ~DarkSaph
CHIBI Style B by *yuikoHeartless
Image size
384x537px 229.09 KB
© 2012 - 2024 YuikoHeartless
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Your use of bold colours helps your image really stand out, and your thick black outlines helps to really define your art style. However, due to the use of brown across the board, your character doesn't look as colourful as other characters drawn in this particular style.

The facial expression conveys the right amount of innocence that a child normally should have, which I believe comes naturally with this style, and the appropriately girlish gesture helps to convey more of the innocence intended. A more outlandish pose really would have made the piece stand out from the crowd but would most likely have spoiled the intended message.

Overall, the image, although striking, is a little lacking in colour and the pose is appropriately girlish, however, because of that, the image loses originality points in my opinion. An outstanding work of art nonetheless.